I motion the waiter
He leaps through hurdles of chairs
He wrestles through crowds of bodies
The blinding lights of the bar
Obstacles that would turn back
Even the bravest waiter
He reaches me, leaning closer to me
To hear what I have to say…
“It needs more salt.”
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I love the subject matter here. So mundane but you turn it into something memorable and dare I say, poetic.
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Oh no, don’t say poetic! Hahaha. Thank you so much, I’m glad you enjoyed it 🙂
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That’s funny!
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Thank you, Sandi! 😀
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You are so welcome!
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Ha! Most excellent 😉
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Thank you! 😀
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Simple & funny 😃 i really imagined the scenario infront of me!
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Exactly what I was aiming for! Thank you very much 😀
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chuckle…
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Seems a tragic situation turned out funny. Great work and thanks for coming in contact. Nice to meet you 😊
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Have to laugh right! Thank you! Good to meet you 🙂
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Yeah right, welcome 😊
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Love the ending, Jack! Took a rather mundane subject and twisted it *just right* Well done.
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Thank you so much!
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Oh dear… 😂
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We’ve all been there! ahhaa 😀
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😂 lol
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Love braves waiters they are the salt of the earth. Well done
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For some reason I’m guessing you’re a waiter 😉 they certainly are though! Thank you
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You really make it appear really easy along with your presentation but I find this matter to be really one thing that I think I would never understand. It sort of feels too complex and extremely large for me. I am looking ahead to your subsequent submit, I’ll try to get the grasp of it!
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