Hug me and fall into my arteries
Let the rivers of my body
Guide you to my heart
So that we can make a home there
Home Is Where The Heart Is
Hug me and fall into my arteries
Let the rivers of my body
Guide you to my heart
So that we can make a home there
Poetry and Writings - A Mind 
Deeply beautiful! Such strong lines.
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I’m happy it resonated with you so much!
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Incredible
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Thank you Kae!!
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🙂
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Love this. Very powerful
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Thank you, Miriam 🙂
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Lovely sentiments continue to ooze from your being 😊
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I’m glad you like them Diana! Lots more to come 🙂
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Very touching and a lot said in a few words.
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That’s what I aim for! Thank you 😀
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Lovely!
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Thank you! Have a good day 🙂
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Well done–very lovely.
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Thank you very much, Jael 🙂
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Most welcome, Jack 🙂
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Jack, this is phenomenal! So short and evocative, with novel images and such a simple and powerful end line.
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I’m glad you enjoyed it mate 🙂
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Reblogged this on Self + Pen and commented:
I just wanted to share with you all this excellent short poem by Jack Bennet. I absolutely love the unabashed quirkiness and the evocativeness of the opening image, and how the poem moves you so inevitably through the steps of each line to the simple, powerful conclusion.
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