Poetic is how she moves
How her hair bounces with the light
How her hips spin and turn
The way her eyes hold me
Bursting like a thousand stars
Her voice trickles down my ears
Like the sweetest of honey
Caramelising my soft heart
A Poets Muse
Poetic is how she moves
How her hair bounces with the light
How her hips spin and turn
The way her eyes hold me
Bursting like a thousand stars
Her voice trickles down my ears
Like the sweetest of honey
Caramelising my soft heart
Poetry and Writings - A Mind 
Beautiful!
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Thank you Jodine!
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This is lovely Jack.
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Thank you for your comment Miriam 🙂
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“Caramelising my soft heart” – Great line.
– Esme nodding upon the Cloud
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Glad you liked it Esme 🙂 always good to hear from you!
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Thank you Kae! 🙂
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Hey this just made my heart melt! I’d love to keep hearing from you 🙂
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I’m glad you enjoy it! Lots more to come 🙂 Thank you
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Wow your sensitivity to connecting words is such a beautiful melody. God bless you. This is amazing
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Thank you so much! I’m so glad you enjoyed it. God bless you too!
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Hmm, you’re just in love. Oh, by the way, thanks for following me.
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With a very lucky lady 🙂 No worries! Thanks for the comment
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That was lovely! Thank you for following my blog.
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I’m glad you enjoyed it! And no worry at all 🙂 Look forward to your posts
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Nice Jack… the images flow into each other… like caramelizing honey…
Well done.
Len Freeman, poemsperday.com
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Thank you for your kind comment 🙂
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You’re good.
This is a great piece!
Keep it up, Cheers! 🙂
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Cheers Ali! Definitely more coming 🙂
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This is so beautiful
Simple and Lovely
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Thank you so much! I’m glad you enjoyed it 🙂
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The poem flows as a sublime lyric. Anand Bose from Kerala
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I’m glad you enjoyed it 🙂 thank you for your comment
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Beautiful!
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Thank you! 🙂
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This is a lovely piece, Jack. It is good to meet you and thank you for following BrewNSpew.
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Glad you’ve enjoyed it! Good to meet you too. No worries! Will be on the lookout for more posts from you!
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Reblogged this on Mandy's Poetry and commented:
beautiful
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Thank you! Glad you liked it
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beautiful poem !
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Very nice! And thank you for the follow! Back at’cha. 🙂
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Glad you enjoyed! And not a worry, looking forward to more stuff
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This reads like a dance, sensuous and mesmerizing. Thanks for the follow.
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Thank you for your kind comment 🙂 Not a worry!
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This is so beautiful, and uses such evocative imagery but it’s vague enough that the reader can imagine their own lover in the poem, which is lovely. Thanks so much for following me, it means a lot 🙂
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Thank you for your kind comment Emma, I’m glad you enjoyed it 🙂 and not a worry! I look forward to your future posts 🙂
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What a lovely poem!
Thank your visiting my blog and leading me to yours!
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Glad to have you! Thank you
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Very Beautiful, Mr. Bennett.
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Thank you, Domina! 🙂
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This is totally awesome, it has everything that a poem needs. Beauty, love, realistic descriptions that leave ideas in the minds of your readers long after they are done reading. I want to thank you for being my 6th follower and I think that I will follow you if I figure out how to do that.
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Thank you for your comment! I’m glad it’s really stuck with you 🙂 That’s what I want! And not a worry! Glad to check other peoples work out, helps me with my own 🙂 You’ll figure it out! Keep at it! haha
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Hi when I read this poem I thought you really have a way with words. I loved how you said it “carmelized your heart” I thought that was perfect.
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I’m glad you enjoyed it so much! Hope your daughter is too 🙂 Thank you for your kind comments
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Your poetry is lovely. Thanks for visiting my blog and following.
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Thank you so much! And not a problem 🙂
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Jack this was so well done! Love the topic of Muses. Loved the imagery and descriptions! More of these????
Hey, thanks for visiting my blog and for following – so honored! I will be looking for more on “The Muse”! Ha! You might be interested in my work “The Muse I Love”
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I’m glad you enjoyed it so much! Thank you 🙂 Of course, I’ll be sure to check it out! Thank you for the kind comment! Hope to see you around more
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This is remarkable. Beautiful poem. x
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Thank you so much!
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Fine rhythmic expression of desire!
Thank you for following my Blog!
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Beautiful imagery, Jack. Keep on writing 🙂
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Will do!
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Lovely poem for a poet in love – like Shakespeare in Love!
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Thank you! I’m sure we can all relate to being in love! 😀 Glad you enjoyed it
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Yes, very much!
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Beautifully sensuous sensual poetry,,,,
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Thank you mate 🙂
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INcredible!!!!
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Thank you 🙂
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Beautiful poem, Jack, and thank you for following BrewNSpew.
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Thank you!
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The poem is elegant , graceful and reminds of me the days of die hard romanticism. Anand Bose from Kerala
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I’m glad you it stirred something inside of you Anand! Thank you so much, have a good day.
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Beautifully romantic, Jack.
Thank you for the follow. I look forward to visiting your blog often. ☺☺
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Thank you very much!! 😀 Not a worry. I look forward to have you here! 🙂
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Caramelising 🙂 – liked the usage
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Thank you very much 🙂 I like the visualisation
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I love ur writing
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Cheers ❤
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